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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   534wkd    µî·ÏÀÏ   2010-02-26
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Hello Elin!
I think you'll have a good vision about life if you will let yourself experience something you want to change!
I hope it will happen!

Take care!

-Teacher Jha

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Title:If you could go any place in the world,where would it be and why?
>>>If you could go to any place in the world, where would it be and why?

I want to go to America's slum quarters and beverly Hills.
>>>I want to go to America's slum quarters and Beverly Hills.

There are most contrasting area in the world.
>>>That is the most contrasting area in the world.

I'll go there and feel their life.
>>>=)

I want to feel what is different and what is the problem.
>>>I want to feel what is different and the problem they experience.

I think difference of wealth and povery is big problem.
>>>I think the  difference between wealth and poverty is a big problem.

I felt it in Korea.
>>>=)

I want to improve it.
>>>=)

But If I try to improve it,I have to experience it.
>>>But If I'll try to improve it, I have to experience it.

So,I want to go to America's slum quarters and beverly Hills,and feel their life.
>>>So, I want to go to America's slum quarters and Beverly Hills and feel their life.
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