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Hi! ( Hello!)
How are you today? ( I'm fine thanks!)
Today, I went to the new school.
>>>correct
In the morning when I woke up, I was really exicted.
>>>I was really excited when I woke up this morning.
>>>I was excited after waking up this morning.
I took a bus for 5 minuates and woke 10minuates to go to school.
>>>I took the bus for 5 minutes and walked for 10 minutes to go to school.
In the classroom, I saw my new classmates.
>>>correct!
I didn't know anyone of them.
>>>correct!
but I made 1friends, thanks for my name.
>>>I made a/ one friend, thanks to my name.
Amazingly, there is the girl who has same as me!
>>>Amazingly, there was a girl whose name was the same as mine.
we smiled each other and we got our phone numbers each other.
>>>We smiled and got the phone number of each other.
I'm really glad to meet her.
>>>I was really glad to meet her. |
