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Hello Sung Jin,
i actually really enjoyed this piece. It is adiary after all, you can write anything on your mind, whether it is something, technical or factual, or just an average day-today experience. This diary is meant as an outlet to emotions and creativity. So enjoy it and never be anxious, write about anything and evrything, whether it be about the weather, pimples, music, madness or politics. Go wild!
Here are the corrections:
Maybe some of students who write these essay can sympathize to this essay heartedly.
> Maybe some of the students who write these essays can sympathize with me whole heartedly.
Actually it was so funny when I begin these writing.
> Actually it was fun when I began writing here.
> fun >> enjoyable
> funny >> ha!ha!ha! comidic, humorous, like Yoo Jae Suk :P
Yeah~ It was fun then,,
> Yeah, it was fun then...
The more I write this, the more my anxious grow.
> :)
Anxious about what?
>:)
Oh, there is no more articles to write,,
> Oh! There are no more articles to write about.
I think writings written in burden can never be a good writing.
> Not always, it depends on the writer.
So now, I will throw away the burden that I should write it with some special stories.
>:)
I look forward to reading more.
Teacher NEa:) |
