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Hi Grace!!
Good job! Now i understand.
Thank you for writing something about your history.
Have a good day!
Take care always!
-Teacher Jha
CORRECTION:
Today is Korean holiday, Samiljeol.
>>>Today is a Korean holiday, Samiljeol.
The verb Samiljeol means March first day and it memorialize the movement
for independence.
>>>The word Samiljeol means the first day of March and it memorializes the movement
for independence.
From 1910 to 1945, Korea was a colony of Japan, and Korean was exploited
by the Japanese colonial government.
>>>From 1910 to 1945, Korea was a colony of Japan, and Koreans were exploited
by the Japanese colonial government.
Finally, in 1919, Korean rose up against suppression by Japanese.
>>>Finally, in 1919, Koreans rose up against the suppression of Japanese.
They demanded the freedom and they demonstrated peacefully crying
‘cheers for independence of Korea’.
>>>They demanded for freedom and they demonstrated peaceful crying and cheers for the independence of Korea.
The movement is suppressed by Japanese, however, the eager for freedom
is now remembered to Korean.
>>>The movement is suppressed by Japanese, however, the eagerness for freedom
is now remembered by Koreans.
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