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Hello Crystal,
Sorry for the delay, here are the corrections for this piece.
The narrator compares herself with her grandmother in terms with height, age, and physical appearance.
> the narrator compares herself to her grandmother in terms of height, age, and physical appearance.
With regard to height, the phrase ‘looking ~ a museum case’, where simile is used, implies that her grandmother is so short that she could get into a museum case.
> With regards to their height, the phrase "looking like a museum case," where a simile is used, implies that her grandmother is so short she could fit in a museum case.
Meanwhile, the narrator describes that her and her grandmother’s age have a wide gap like bookends using simile in the phrase ‘like living bookends’.
> Meanwhile, the narrator describes that she and her grandmother's age has a considerable gab, like bookends, using the simile "like living bookends."
In addition, the phrase ‘even ~ journey’, which contains metaphor, also expresses that the narrator’s age is merely correspond to a tiny part of her grand mother’s long life.
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Finally, the narrator portrays the differences between the size of her and her grandmother’s feet, which is one of the physical properties, using smile in the phrase ‘they are like bonsai trees’.
> I like this one.
See you in a bit.
Teacher NEa:) |
