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Hello Mr. Joey^-^
I really want to visit your country too
but I have to prepare some things first before going there^-^
I hope that you could also come over here eh
>>>Here are the following grammar corrections:
Title: Not easy... express my thoughts in words.
=It's not easy to put my thoughts in words.
Tuesday, March 2, 2010
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Today I was not explain the meaning that I wanted the meaning.
=Today I wasn't able to explain the meaning of what I wanted to say.
I'm a professional soldier and soldiers had various kinds duties.
=I'm a professional soldier and each soldier has a designated kind of specialty.
One of my duty is to administer a computer room and computer network and database of military troops to take the responsibility.
=One of my responsibilities is to provide a computer room with a computer network also containing military troop databases.
It is very hard that express my thoughts in words.
=It is very hard to express my thoughts in words.
Good night~ teacher Khristine.
=Good night Teacher Khristine!
ps, I feel sorry that you don't for winter sports in your country. (T-T)
Please come and visit our country.
I also wish visit in your country.
=P.S.
I feel sorry that you don't enjoy winter sports in your country.
Please come and visit our country.
I also wish to visit your country.
Teacher Khristine |
