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Hello Miju,
I am glad you decided to give writing a try, this can also serve as a good way for you to practice.
Here are some corrections:
In These days, I learned to swimming.
> These days, I learned to swim.
> These days, I am learning to swim.
In the old time, water is feared.
> In the past, I feared the water.
But now, Water isn't feared.
> But now, I am no longer afraid of the water.
I like swimming and swimming is fun!
> I am glad you had this happy experience. This is a good sentence.
Bye~
Please keep on writing. It is a good way for you to practice your english skills.
See you tomorrow.
Teacher Nea:) |
