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I'd like to visit my hometown and have a good time with my family.
>>>Correct!
If I go to Jeju Island, I can see beautiful beaches and mountains.
>>>If I go to Jeju Island, I could see beautiful beaches and mountains. ( Conditionals use past tense modals )
I usually stay at home during the winter vacation.
>>>Great!
I don't like to go skiing or do outdoor activities.
>>>I don't like to go skiing or to do outdoor activities. ( Parallellism applies here.)
Fortunately, my wife also likes to stay at home.
>>>Great!
How many children do you have? (I have no child now,and trying to a have child.) ( I have a daughter and she's two years old.)
Do you spend much time on the education of your children?
>>>Good sentence!
Many korean parents have attention for educating their children.
>>>Many Korean parents pay attention in educating their children.
They spend much money and time in educating and raising their kids.
Dear Young,
I'm happy to read your diary again. Parents are really like that. My daughter is only two years old and she doesn't go to school yet however, I'm also concerned about her early education. I'm thinking of the best way on how she could learn the English language easier. Just wait for your turn... sooner or later you will also be called "daddy". Maybe the time is yet to come. Don't pressure yourselves ( you and your wife) .
Sincerely,
Teacher Emely
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