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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   kasanobang    µî·ÏÀÏ   2010-03-03
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Hello Mr. Joey^-^

 

It's warm here in the Philippines and it's getting hotter because we are entering the dry season.

We are actually having some  drought right now and it's not good

I wish I could send you some of the Philippines warm temperature

and you could add up some bonnets, mittens and jacket at night and more blankets too

 

Here are the following grammar corrections:

 

Wednesday, March 3, 2010
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Here is still cold in the morning and night.

=It's still cold here especially in the morning and at night.

I don't like the coldness. I would rather hot than cold.
=I don't like the coldness. I would rather prefer the weather to be hot than cold.


In the past, when I worked in a cold area, I had a rough time of it.

=In the past, I was having a rough time when I am working in a cold area.

So I really don't like the cold and since I was born in a warm area, I don't like the cold.

=

Maybe I envy you were born in a warm country.

=Maybe I envy you because you were born in a warm country.

 

Teacher Khristine

 

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