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Hello Elin!
I think this is a very inspiring story.Thank you for sharing!
I hope we will also be able to inspire other people like what your hero did.
Take care!
-teacher jha
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Title:Who is your here and why?
>>>Title:Who is your hero and why?
My hero is Na young Kim.
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She skated figure better than Yuna Kim when she was young.
>>>She did figure skating better than Yuna Kim when she was young.
But she had a traffic accidentin her teens.
>>>But she had a car accident in her teens.
She stopped ro skate figure for a long time and injured her knees.
>>>She stopped figure skating for a long time and injured her knees.
She had to operate her knees,but if she operate her knees,she couldn't skate again.
>>>She had to have her knees operated, but if she does,she couldn't skate again.
She couldn't give up her skating.
>>>She couldn't give up on her skating.
So she didn't operate her knees and started to skate again.
>>>So she didn't have a knee operation and she started to skate again.
She isn't a brilliant figure skater,but she is a happy skater.
>>>She isn't a brilliant figure skater but she is happy.
I think she got a lot of pains and a sense of inferiority when she start again.
>>>I think she has gotten a lot of pains and a sense of inferiority when she started again.
I respect her courage and passions.
>>>I respect her courage and passion.
If I was her,I couldn't start again.
>>>If I were her,I couldn't start again.
She knew she can't be a top skater.
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But she loved figure skating.
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She is exerting to get more skills.
>>>She is exerting efforts to get more skills.
Na young kim is the most beautiful person to me.
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