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Hello Elin!

May all your dream come true!
Good luck!
Take care!

 

-teacher jha

 

CORRECTION:

 

Title:What do you envision yourself doing 10 years from now?
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I'll have been a journalist who protect weak people.

>>>I might be a journalist who protects weak people.

 

I'll have been a person who always powerful and vivid.

>>>I might be a person who is always powerful and vivid.

 

I'll have met many friends in other coutries and introduced about Korea.

>>>I might be meeting many friends in other countries and introduce about Korea.

 

I'll have become a valuable person in Korea.

>>>I might become a valuable person in Korea.

 

I'll have helped many children who are difficult to study because they don't have money.

>>>I might help many children who have difficulty in studying because they don't have money.

 

And I'll have been a global journalist.
>>>And I might be a global journalist.

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