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Hello Ms. Jane^-^
Wow!!! Pretty long message you got right here but
I am actually having a great time reading it.
Thank you for making one
Yeah, I did have a good time today and that includes a tasty lunch and dinner
I just ate awhile ago
Although your voice was drowned by the background sound,
I was still able to hear you though.
About easily falling in love...ummm it sounds like you would easily get out of it too...
nah just kidding
Here are the following grammar corrections:
i am writing the diary after i was clean~
=I wrote this diary after cleaning
did you had a good time today?
=Did you have a good time today?
ah~your correction and your heartful concern about me are very thank^_^!!kk
but..'proper treatment' of the correction is wrong~
=Ah, about your corrections and your heartful concern about me, thank you very much^_^
but the corection about the 'proper treatment was wrong but the correction about receiving a proper treatment was wrong.
i spoke 'property's man was very gentle and handsome' kk
=I was referring to the man's property although he was really gentle and handsome
when we were talking, my voice was drowned out by the subway station's noise maybe~
=When we were talking, my voice was drowned out by the noise coming from the subway station, maybe
i'm sorry~kk
(No problem )
is property's man right expression??
i don't know this~ kk
=(It should be "the man's property")
anyway..i met property's man on last friday for find the house to stay in seoul because fix into my nursing's duty .
=Anyway, I saw the man's property last Friday while I was finding for a place where I can stay in Seoul for my duty
i falling in love just two day's meet.
=I fell in love just after two days of meeting him.
i am a person who fall in love everyday.kkk besides, i get cold often kkk
i am a burning girl. kk
=I am a person who fall in love everyday but often easily gets cold. I'am a passionate girl.
i will go to the bed for my skin care~
is your skin good? kk
=I will go to the bed for my skin care~
Is your skin good? kk (I wish I had a really good skin eh...hahaha)
i want to get a silky skin T_T byebye~ㅎ.ㅎ
=I want to get a silky skin T_T byebye~ㅎ.ㅎ
Teacher Khristine
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