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   Á¦ ¸ñ   I'm sorry to Nea :)    »ó Å  
   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   miju4985    µî·ÏÀÏ   2010-03-09
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Hello Nea :)
> Anyong Miju,

 

I had fun speaking to you yesterday even if you were a bit sleepy, I had fun :)

 

Here are some corrections:


a long time ago, I'm sorry to Nea.
>  For what happened a while ago, I'm sorry Nea.


In the morning, I swimmed in swimming pool.
> I went swimming during the  morning.


so, I was very tired.
> So I was very tired.


I would like to little sleep, but I'm very deep sleep.
> I wanted to take a nap, but I fell into a deep sleep.


hahaha :)
>:))


Are you good at sit-up?
> Are you good at sit-up's?


I'm not good at sit-up.

> I'm not good in doing sit-ups.


I have to sit-up well, to become a flight attendant.
> I have to be able to do sit-ups well to become a flight attendant.


so, I bought sit-up machine today.
> So, I bought a sit-up machine today.


From now on, I wii do sit-up everyday.
> From now on I would do sit-ups everyday.


and

Drinking make somebody friendly. ¡çIs that good sentence?
> Drinking can help make somebody friendly.

> Drinking can help you make new friends.


In korea, people force liquor to person.
> In Korea people force liquor in a person.


That isn't good habits.
> That isn't a good habit.


Have a nice day~ Nea:) byebye~

> Have a great one. See you in a while.

 

Teacher NEa:)

   ÀÌÀü±Û Good evening :)
   ´ÙÀ½±Û rainy day..