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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   momowonju    µî·ÏÀÏ   2010-03-09
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Hello Jane^^

 

Oh! Thank you about the skin care tip 

I do appreciate it very much^-^

 

Now, I think you are referring to him as a  real estate broker.

Is this the word you are looking for???

 

I heard one of my students telling me something about the Vietnam rice noodles

and I heard that it's really tasty and savory That's interesting

 

Rest well tonight^-^

 

>>>Here are the following grammar corrections:

 

i'am too tired today~

=I am too tired today.

(Always capitalize the pronoun I and start your sentence with the first letter in the first word capitalized too.)


I need to raise the level of my strength
I have to raise the level of my strength! kk
becauseI have a low-grade strength.


so after some go around, i was tired soon.

=I easily get tired after going around for some time


although this, so i eat the Vietnam rice noodles which i am really like before that i am satisfied. kk

=Although i'm tired,  the Vietnam rice noodles made me feel recharged and the taste was satisfying.

your heartful concern about me is let me cheer up! kk
really! thank you~¢½
i will keep in mind your concern always~^^*

=Your heartful concern about me makes me cheer up.

I am really grateful.

I will always keep in mind your concerns about me.

um..i mean property's man is the man in the real state kk
it's ok?kkk

=(It is real estate broker)

do you know that we have to go to a bedroom on 12:00 at least to have a nice skin ?

=Do you know that we have to go to a bed at 12:00 at least to have a nice skin ? (Oh, no I didn't know that)


the time when 12:00~2:00 is skin recycling time. kk
memory this~! kk

=By 12:00-2:00 the skin is on the process of rejuvenating. Memorize this! (Yup, got it)


(but i am not keep this well. to keep this is very hard to me -.,-
but so i am tired now that i can keep this today wow~~~~~~~~~)

=But I can't keep up to this rule because it's very hard to me.

I'm so tired now so I can't keep this day a wow.

 

Teacher Khristine

 

 

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