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Hello Miju,
I am glad that if tehre are words you don't understand you do research. Thank you for your efforts, continue doing well.
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Hello Nea :)
After the class, I find cherry blossom in the internet.
> After the class, I searched for the words "cherry blossom" on the internet.
I know cherry blossom well.
I know Cherry Blossoms well.
Oh My god! I didn't know this.....
>:)
There are a lot of cherry blossom in Spring.
> There are a lot of Cherry Blossoms in the spring.
Korea held the cherry blossom festival once a year.
> :)
Nea! If you have the chance, come to Korea :)
> I would love too.
I have never been to Philippines.
> I have never been to the Philippines.
My friends said, Cebu is Beatiful.
> My friends said that cebu is beautiful.
> My city, Baguio is more beautiful.
I want to go philippines.
> I want to go to the Philippines.
Let me introduce your country :)
> Introduce me to your country :)
> When you do visit, it would be a pleasure to take you around.
Nea! See you tomorrow.
> See you tomorrow.
Enjoy the snow.
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