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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   534wkd    µî·ÏÀÏ   2010-03-11
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Hello Elin!
I hope you'll meet her someday. I think she's an inspiration to you!
I believe you will be a good journalist someday.

Just study harder!

Take care!

-teacher jha

 

CORRECTION:

 

Title:If you could have dinner with anyone living or dead,who would it be and why?

>>>Title: If you could have a dinner with someone, alive or dead, who would it be and why?


I want to have dinner with Sun Mi Kim who is a journalist.

>>>=)

 

She works at Dong A newspaper.

>>>=)

 

When I read her journal,I can feel vivid and alive.

>>>=)

 

I don't find her journal but I know her journal's feeling.It is special.

>>> I don't find her journal but I know her journal's feeling, it is special.

 

It has many informations,but it isn't boring.Her journal is fun and useful.

>>>It has many informations but it isn't boring. Her journal is fun and useful.

 

I want to meet her and ask how could she become a journalist.

>>>I want to meet and ask her how did she become a journalist.

 

I want to ask what is her power in her journal. I want to write journal like that.

>>>I want to ask what is her power in her journal. I want to write a journal like hers.

 

I want to write a journal which makes people happy and fun.

>>>=)

 

Sun Mi Kim is my favorite journalist in Korea.

>>>=)

 

I respect her.

>>>=)

 

I want to feel her feeling wifh having dinner.
>>>I want to feel her feeling while having a dinner with her.

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