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Hello~!
> Anyong Si-yun :)
Here are some corrections:
it's my writing about question. I think writing helps for me to prepare for the exam.
> I an writing my answers to some questions. I think writing helps me prepare for the exam.
>> I agree :)
3.I think this picture is about picnic.
> I think this picture is about a picnic.
I can see some people in the picture. Some of them are sitting in their chairs and two of them are standing.
A car has been parked behind them.
On the right side of the picture, a tent is set on the ground, and also there is a woman who is feeding a dog.
It seems like they are having a fun time.
> Good sentences but watch your punctuation and capitalization.
4.The most important thing for me is a price. I am a student so I don’t have money as much as I buy a expensive computer.
> The most important thing for me is the price. I am a student so I don't have enough money to buy an expensive computer.
5.I think the advantages of using a laptop computer are that I can use it anywhere and I don’t need to have a big place for cpmputer.
> I think the advantages of using a laptop computer is that I can use it anywhere, and I don't need t have a big place for my computer.
See you in a bit.
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