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Woah! Fourth installation, anyong Si-yun:)
Here are the corrections:
11.I prefer to listen to other’s opinions to get some help.
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If I have to make a decision, I used to discuss with older people like parents and professor.
> If I have to make a decision, I used to discuss it with older people like my parents or my professor.
I think older people have various experience in their field and life. I believe it helps for me to make a decision.
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For example when I was a student I didn’t know what kind of job is the most suitable for me.
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I concerned about my future and my dream.
> I am concerned about my future and my dream.
Sometimes I talked about them with friends , parents, professor, and They often advised to me.
> Sometimes I talked about them with my friends, parents, professor and they often give me advise.
Now I’m working in the sales department of the abc company. I’m very satisfied with my job.
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i think it was a good choice to choose a this field of job.
> I think it was a good choice to choose this field for my job.
Their advices helped my choice.
Therefore I prefer to listen to other’s opinions to get some help.
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