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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   jdmy89    µî·ÏÀÏ   2010-03-12
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Hello Grace!
You did a good composition today!
Keep up the good work!

Have a great day!
Take care!

 

CORRECTION:

 

Nowadays, it is not an unusual thing one¡¯s pictures and identities are exposed against one¡¯s will.
>>>Nowadays, it is not an unusual thing that one¡¯s pictures and identities are exposed against one¡¯s will.

If someone acts weird, his or her pictures are taken in an instant and that picture is posted on web.
>>>If someone acts weird, his or her pictures are taken in an instant and that picture is posted on the web.


And the speed of spreading is so fast, thus, within a few minutes the entire nation can see the picture.
>>>=)

 

This happens because of the development and propagation of digital cameras.
>>>=)


These days everyone possesses their own digital camera or cell phone with a camera.
>>>=)


So, they can take a picture whenever they want.
>>>=)


It is sad that technology made a rapid progress but the etiquette and manners are relatively slow.

>>>=)

   ÀÌÀü±Û I commit mistakes.
   ´ÙÀ½±Û yesterday I met my friend.