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Hello Grace!
Nice to read something from you, again!
There may be negative and positive sides in having your own honepage.
Just enjoy the good fruit of technology, it is really up to you to control!=)
Enjoy your day!
Take care!
-teacher jha
CORRECTION:
I have no personal homepage like Cyworld or Myspace.
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When I was a middle school student, the Cyworld was just beginning and had a spotlight as a new internet community site.
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At that time, all of my classmates tried it, so I made mine as well.
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However, after I started to mange the personal homepage, I was addicted and obsessed about managing that site.
>>>However, after I started to manage the personal homepage, I was addicted and obsessed about managing that site.
I couldn’t do my work because I wasted my time to decorate the site and communicate with friends on the web.
>>>I couldn't do my work because I wasted my time decorating the site and communicating with friends on the web.
So, I made a decision to quit managing the personal homepage.
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Nowadays, Cyworld is essential thing within young person and I thought about managing my page again.
>>>Nowadays, Cyworld is an essential thing to young people and I thought about managing my page again.
However I’m worried about that I had had mistake.
>>>However, I'm worried about having mistakes again.
And, now I have no ability to decorate and manage the site as a lively space.
>>>And now, I have no ability to decorate and manage the site as a lively space like before. |
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