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Good evening Miju,
I liked this topic :) I enjoyed whow you started and how you ended this piece:)
Here are a few corrections:
Hello Nea :)
>:)
When do you see the man, where see at first?
> When you see a man, what do you look at first?
> When you see a man, what do you first notice?
> What do yu first notice when you see a man?
>>> I look at their eyes... weird :P
I see a man tall at first.because I am tall.
> I look at how tall a man is first, because I am tall.
I have one hundred sixtyeight centimeters.
> I am one hundred and sicty-eight centimeters in height.
These days, Men usally are over one hundred eighty centimeters.
> These days, men are usually over one hundred and eighty centimeters tall.
But tall men are usally ugly man.
> But tall men are usually ugly men :)
Short men are usally handsome.
> Short men are usually handsome.
It's always like that.
>:)
I choosed my boyfriend very well.
> I chose my boyfriend very well.
Because He has both.
> Because he has both.
I'm sorry Nea:) kidding!
>:) :) :)
Although My boyfriend is very handsome, He is tall and charming.
> Although my boyfriend is very handsome, he is also tall and very charming.
See you tomorrow :)
> Thanks for sharing :)
Have a great evening.
Teacher nEa:) |
