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Hello Elin!
I wish that you will accomplish watever dream you have with the help of your school!
Take care!
Study hard!
-teacher jha
CORRECTION:
Title:Why do you want to go to our school?
If I can go to this school,I think I can acomplish my dream more fastly.
>>>If I can go to this school, I think I can accomplish my dream faster.
There are many programs which can improve my ability.
>>>=)
I want to compete with a lot ot good students and make many good friends.
>>>I want to compete with a lot of good students and make many good friends.
I think my ability is not good enough and I wnat to fill it with my friends.
>>>I think my ability is not good enough and I want to fill it with my friends.
There are debate club and a lot of good clubs that I want to join in.
>>>There are debate clubs and a lot of good clubs that I want to join in.
This school want global student.
>>>This school wants a global student.
I'll ant in all around the world,not just in Korea.
>>>Many students come from different countries around the world not just from Korea.
This school and help me to be a global student.
>>>This school helps me to be a global student.
That's the reason why I choose this school.
>>>=)
My ideal life attitude is 'challenge'.
>>>My ideal life attitude is "challenge".
This attitude is suit with this school.
>>>This attitude is suitable in this school.
I challenged this school and I hope I can be a Seoul global high school student.
>>>I am challenged in this school and I hope I can be a Seoul global high school student. |
