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Hello Grace!
What an interesting story!=)
Keep on writing!
Take care!
-teacher jha
CORRECTION:
Last weekend, I investigated a spirit in Korean mountain to write a report.
>>>Last weekend, I investigated about a spirit dwelling in the Korean mountain for my report
While investigating, I found an interesting story about ancient myth and I want to tell this story.
>>>While investigating, I found out an interesting story about an ancient myth and I want to tell this story.
A long time ago, in Mt. Jiri, there lived a couple, they were both god in Korea and they loved each other.
>>>A long time ago, in Mt. Jiri, there lived a couple. They were both gods in Korea and they loved each other.
Woman’s name was Ma-go and Man’s name was Ban-ya.
>>>The woman's name was Ma-go and Man's name was Ban-ya.
One day, Ban-ya suddenly left Ma-go, so she waited for Ban-ya.
>>>=)
She always looked cloudy sky on west side because she thought Ban-ya was existing in the cloud.
>>>She always looked at the cloudy sky on the west side because she thought Ban-ya was existing on the cloud.
And she made clothes for Ban-ya while waiting him.
>And she madde clothes for Ban-ya while waiting for him
Then one day the cloud flowed toward to Ma-go and passed her.
>>>Then one day the cloud went down toward Ma-go and passed in front of her.
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