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Hello Grace!
It was a sad story.
Anyway, thanks for sharing!
Have a good day!
Take care!
-teacher jha
CORRECTION:
Finally the cloud arrived in the highlands in Mt. Jiri where a lot of beautiful chickweeds bloomed.
>>>Finally, the cloud arrived at the highlands on Mt. Jiri where a lot of beautiful chickweeds bloomed.
Ma-go tried to catch the cloud because she thought the cloud was Ban-ya’s white sleeves, however the cloud wasn’t never caught.
>>>Ma-go tried to catch the cloud because she thought the cloud was Ban-ya's white sleeves, however, the cloud was never caught.
Ma-go was infuriated and regretted having loved him.
>>>Ma-go was infuriated and she regretted having loved him.
And she tore the clothes that she had made.
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The torn clothes became a dead tree in highland of Mt Jiri.
>>>The torn clothes became a dead tree on the highland of Mt Jiri.
And Ma-go was infuriated of the chickweed because she thought the flower deceived her using their beauty.
>>>And Ma-go was infuriated of the chickweeds because she thought that the flowers deceived her using their beauty.
So she commanded the chickweed to get out of the Mt. Jiri.
>>>So she commanded the chickweeds to get out of Mt. Jiri.
Thus there are no chickweeds in Mt. Jiri now.
>>>Thus, there are no chickweeds at Mt. Jiri now.
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