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Hello Grace!
I think you can write well.
Just be careful with you punctuations ( " ). Maybe it has something to do with your computer.
Anyway, keep it up!
May you grow more with your strengths.
CORRECTION:
No one is perfect and everyone has their own pros and cons.
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There is a famous Korean saying, “Even larva has a rolling talent”.
>>>There is a famous Korean saying, "Even larva has a rolling talent".
It means everyone has their own talent.
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I think that I’m good at presentation.
>>>I think that I'm good at giving presentations.
Most people are afraid of standing in front of audience but that doesn’t make me scared.
>>>Most people are afraid of standing in front of audience but that doesn't make me scared.
I can enjoy speaking to audience.
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On the other hand, I am not good at counseling someone.
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I don’t know what to say when someone wants to be counseled.
>>>I don't know what to say when someone wants to be counseled.
I always try to give some advices, but I think it is not successful.
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So, I’ll just listen their trouble and say like “If I were you…”.
>>>So, I'll just listen to their trouble and say something like "If I were you".
That will work on many situations.
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