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My first impression of my boss was bad.
>>>Great!
He's hard to talk to.(Of course, it's still hard to talk to until now.)
He looked like very stubborn.
>>>( OMG! Really?So how do you deal with him?)
He have worked at an audit department for a long time, and he seemed to be strict to principles and regulations.
>>>He has worked in an audit department for a long time and seemed to be strict to principles and regulations. ( You don't need to put a comma before the word "and".)
Actually, he is so principled.
>>>Wow!
People usually judge someone by appearance.
>>>True!
However, as time goes on, we become aware of real personality, we sometimes realize we are not correct.
>>>However, as time goes by, we become aware of the real personality and sometimes realize that we are not correct.
Do you know halo effect? It's means that good appearance influences greatly on first impression.
>>>Do you know the "halo effect"? It means that good appearance greatly influences first impressions.
If someone is handsome or beautiful, we think that they are smart and kind.
>>>If someone is handsome or beautiful, we think that he is smart or kind. ( Someone is a singular pronoun.)
Seen from my experience,first impression is not always right.
or>>> Based on my experience, first impression is not always right. ( I agree!) |
