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Hello Asha,
I am glad you decided to continue writing :)
Here are the grammar corrections for this piece.
I have studied English since 11 years old. > I have studied English since I was 11 years old.
but I didn't like English > But I didn't like English.
morover I studied English for entrance examination college. > Morover I had to study English for the entrance examination for college.
When I was a soldier, I wanted to study English. >:)
I realized it that there wasn't no English there. > I realized that I could not use English there. > I realized that I could not study English there.
I sincerely started to study English after finishing military service. >:)
I think I'm not getting better English especially listening and speaking. > I think I'm not getting better in English specially with listening and speaking. > I disagree, I think you are showing minute but steady progress.
I have to be more studying English. > I have to study English more.
See you tomorrow.
Teacher NEa:) |
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