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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   jdmy89    µî·ÏÀÏ   2010-03-31
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Hi there!
I'm glad you are more conscious with food that you eat!
Keep it up!

Have a good day!
Take care!

 

CORRECTION:

 

Today, my younger brother went on a school trip.

>>>=)


So my family decided to eat something my brother doesn't like.
>>>=)


And we went to Korean restaurant and had a dinner there.
>>>And we went to a Korean restaurant and had dinner there.


My younger brother doesn't like Korean restaurants because there are lots of vegetables and few meats.
>>>My younger brother doesn't like Korean restaurants because there are lots of vegetables and a little meat.

Anyway, the food was very delicious and, without kids, we had a meal pleasantly.
>>>Anyway, the food was very delicious and, without kids, we had our meal pleasantly.(we had a pleasant meal)


Then my mom was surprised that I ate vegetables very well.
>>>=)


Before a few years I loved pizza and chicken like a common girl.
>>>A few years ago, I loved pizza and chicken like a common girl.


And I didn't like vegetables and beans.
>>>=)


However, now I eat like adults and I think that food is very tasty.
>>>=)


 

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